I have always liked the original version of this song. Now I can listen to this version at any given time and it still excites me. The music, lyrics, structure and melody in the original captured how I was feeling in the period written. Years later, the music, lyrics, structure and melody define how things can change. I like everything about this song. Tom spiced this one up perfect. The only thing I would have done differently if I had my way, of course, is shortened the intro. I obviously didn't pursue it with any degree of passion. Actually, the into seems to fit this version better than the older version, in my opinion. Although I can write and produce actual music, it is more Tom's field and I try and look at it in the following perspective: It is difficult for me as a person, hearing what I know melodically and lyrically is ideal in my head, to oblige to another's ideals which I don't necessarily agree with. In short, it feels like someone is stepping on my toes or invading my space. Tom is a person just like I am a person. To receive, you must also give. Tom and I have worked together long enough to know each others limits. But I also think we have grown more patient, compromising and open to suggestion in our writing. We analyzed and evaluated this song together and re-wrote line by line. I really enjoyed this and look forward to writing this way in the future. Another great collaborative effort. I like the similarities we came up with in lyrical content yet with a different spin on the past, present and future. Tom also did an excellent job on this recording and mastering. Genius.
Tom's Rebuttle: Shorten the intro!! What? Are you F***in' kidding me? Martian Dictators don't compromise, they conquer and take! Jeffrey, I must now melt your brain with my telekinetic mind scanner.